I quite like the plain line, but I reckon the painted version is more readable and more atmospheric. It serves the story better - I need that sense of airless claustrophobia.
The first scene sets up a flashback - here the protagonist is, in her 90's style apartment, being haunted by her stupid mistake. [Cue lightning and thunder].
..may not break any landspeed records, but is steady, cruiser-like. I have produced a pile of minor character drawings.
Some progress: rough main and minor characters.